Not great
Ok you do know you can have different layers so that you don't have to redraw the background every time? It just looks pretty awful having everything shaking the whole time. Also nothing really happens and it all looks pretty lazy. Try writing a script or at least have some idea of what the flash is supposed to make the audience feel, cause this just doesn't do anything.
I do have script. But didnt have enough time to fully use it. Also the shaking was done on purpose. To give it that cartooony style.
Nice!
This was pretty good, the animation was well done and both the ideas were interesting and made me smile. The menu loop is pretty funny perhaps put it on the audio portal? I didn't mind the lack of color because the character designs and fluid animation made up for it. Not sure what to tell you to improve other than just making a longer story based animation...
Thanks my good man! Perhaps I shall upload the song to the portal.
Epic
Why has this got such a low score?
I really enjoyed this, good to see some actual animation and art on newgrounds rather than a tweened triangle. I'm not sure about the story, and the sound was a bit crackly with some dodgey transitions but over all its a very nice piece of work. Good stuff!
Ha ha
That was perfect. Loved the audio commentary and the out-takes where great "Terry? Oh i put you down as pete..." Good animation and voice acting too.
Why thank you, I like that you like my voices!
Awesome
Just watched the whole series and really liked it! The poetry was pretty good but the story was great, i liked the psychedelia of it all and the symbolism and just the whole weird and yet palpable feel the whole thing had. You really created a world i could imagine. Nice stuff!
Man comedy genius
The funniest thing is the people who don't get it
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