Have you seen Golfinho's work and do you know what irony is? If not the realization may come as an embarrassment when you look back on this flash. As for this flash, not very good. The art was very lazy, i mean half the time you didn't even draw to the edge of the border, the only time you used color was for the blue tears (inaccurate use of color) and there was no animation. It was really just a poorly made slideshow of some poorly drawn black and white cartoon scribbles. Don't submit stuff you make in half an hour unless in that half an hour entered some dionysian frenzy and poured your soul out through some creative technique you've spent years mastering to the point that time is almost an irrelevancy. You obviously haven't done that, so just take a bit more time and effort and be patient and produce something that you can be proud of.