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[FRONTPAGEFLASH.SWF]

Parodies are still supposed to be funny. Mocking something isn't inherently good and scribbles and shouts are inherently bad even when done satirically.
I don't like video game parodies either but at least oney, egoraptor, etc. actually put some work in to it and make something that's decent to look at it.
This is completely devoid of artistic merit and wit and mocking oafish comedy by making oafish comedy isn't challenging or impressive. You can mock things with no subtlety using subtlety and that might actually have been amusing but this was just as bland and over the top and bad (probably worse actually) then what it was trying to mock.

[Macrocosm]

Pahgawk you modest master of animation! Every piece i watch from you impresses me more and more and this was no exception. Yes, the frame by frame was a little lacking but you still had some great transitions, an interesting use of colors (i liked the yellow glows) and some inspiring 3d effects. How did you do those rotating wire frames? Very nice work on that. I think you're story telling could do with a bit of work but this is NATA so of course you're rushed and i can't complain too much because this one certainly gave me chills. Fortunately i was familiar with the concept you were putting across having read a great short story about it here (remove the spaces):
http://everything2.com/title/I+don%25 27t+know%252C+Timmy%252C+being+God+is +a+big+responsibility
so despite not being wowed by the originality of the idea i was certainly wowed by the artistry with which you conveyed it. Those wonderful shots when the scientist realizes that perhaps he is just one of an infinite loop and that long zoom from world to world. Of course the universe would have to be part of the system too but i suppose that zooms a bit big even for you.
I like that you make your own music and it's alway fitting but i think you should try something with sound effects and voice acting etc. Only because having just music gives the animations a sort of "music-video" feel that is slightly off putting. Also you've got a fun and unique art style but everyone always seems to be pulling the same dismayed expressions. I'm being picky of course and overall i really did enjoy this animation a lot. Good work with this, good luck with nata, and keep at it! Sorry to hear about your website.

Pahgawk responds:

Ahh yes, I remember reading that story! It was definitely inspiration for this.

Also I was sort of thinking that maybe the "world particle" was just a component of a larger particle, so it was there all along, but then that raises the question of why all the worlds shut off when he turned off just one of the practically endless others. It's definitely a plot hole I didn't think through enough.

[Helio Inc]

It's a real shame this only has one review because i thought it was brilliant! The first thing that struck me was the interesting character design. I felt it had a very greek feel to it but i don't really know anything about greece i don't why. The personification of the sun and moon in to an office setting was highly original and your use of sound effects was lovely too. The music and the art style produced an excellent and engaging mood that immediately had me hooked and draw in to the world. I really can't think of much to criticize, the heads always being side on was perhaps a little awkward but i loved how you animated the turning around as a rotation. Very cool!
The story was definitely a little hard to follow and i never understood the point of conflict between the clouds and the sun nor why he got so angry. Perhaps some subtitles would be nice, but then again that might ruin some of the ambiguity and generality of the plot. Lot's of nice transitions (i especially liked the pan up from the basement to the water cooler). All in all definitely one of the most enjoyable flashes i've seen a good while. Keep it up!

DieterTheuns responds:

Thanks for the review :)

All credit for sound goes to codeblackhayate though. She really bailed me out and did so with amazing material. I do realize the story feels a little rushed at times, which deeply hurts it. Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it ^^

[Flash, Never gives up]

I don't particular like the concept, walk cycles through day and night loops are overdone and not particulary interesting. The music was over the top and made me cringe a bit, and you didn't credit it either. Always credit music used!
The animation is quite nice and the walk cycle looks nice and relaxed though he's walking with his palms facing backwards like a neanderthal and i don't think anybody really does that. You should have his palms facing his body to make it look a little more natural. I don't like your art style, the block colours are very dull and the sharp outlines and blocky shapes look too sterile. That's just a personal preference though and it certainly looks clean/proffesional even though i dislike it. I think the musical symbols hovering around his head should have been more transparent as they sort of stuck out and blocked some of the scenery.
I was going to say you should have had some lighting effects and overlays but you used to introduce them a little later on in that dark blueish scene. Some shadows could have made it seem a little more 3d as it all felt a little flat, as though it were 2d planes layered behind each other.
It's definitely not a bad flash and i think if you put the skills you've gained in making this into an animation with a plot and a better concept you could produce something really nice. Good luck!

TeddyKickas responds:

Thx for your comment.

To be honnes this is actualy my first flash that I public.
And for that I realy appriciate your comment it wil come in handy for the future.

[Pleasure Island 4]

Brilliant!
You have such a unique style of humour and animation it's always a pleasure to see what you'll come up with next. The opening to this animation was just perfect, your original composition "Man vs. Walrus-Man" set a magical and mysterious tone and i loved that long pan (is it still called a pan if it's vertical?) down to the two bugs fucking. Very amusing. I liked the shots with the camera moving in 3d and fernandos epic entrance. I really can't think of much to criticize, great voice acting, great music, great art, nice colours and an amusing script. Nice work!

Sexual-Lobster responds:

i think it is still called a pan, maybe a vertical pan.

[Bots on Pot]

Somebody already beat you to it:
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /520997
3 long years ago. And to be honest whilst that version was funny for how sloppy and scrappy and intentionally shit it was this animation really doesn't add anything to the audio and in fact the character designs and cleanness of it really don't work very well with it.
I'm sure it was good practice with the v-cam and all but i don't think it's something that needs submitting to the portal.

Mirak responds:

well my mom say it's great

[Just Wink]

Ah, see now i feel bad for my other review. You obviously do know what you're doing and i really like the animation on this one. In fact everything about this one is very clean and crisp looking, the colours are nice and the character designs are cute. Again, it's a little short but atleast it loops so the entertainment value is extended somewhat. The music makes me smile, good stuff!

Gerkinman responds:

Thanks mate, im glad you took the time to watch, and enjoyed it :)

[Mind]

Way too short for the portal. The fbf really isn't very good either, everything "morphs" in that horrible way people animated everything when they've just started. Nothing has any solid shape or weight that carries through in it's movement, the animation is smooth in the sense that the outlines move smoothly from one place to another but that really isn't what animation is about. It's the general shape that must move smoothly, the black outlines are not meant to have any solid weight of their own.
Obviously i'm being a little harsh as this is fairly experimental and morphing is actually a part of it but even the things which are supposed to have solid shapes are morphing (the monster who opens his mouth). Of course in animation characters do squash and stretch a bit, but really you should learn the rules before you break them. Beyond that the art was decent and the backgrounds were interesting and professional looking. Can't say i liked the content much, far too random for my liking. You clearly have skill i just think it's important to avoid that morphing animation style that treats everything as 2d shapes.

Gerkinman responds:

I appreciate your honest feed back. The morphing was a deliberate element that was chosen to help accentuate the themes of the animation (which was made in 2009 by the way), but I do agree that morphing fbf can look very much like inexperience and its something that despite being a professional animator for the last 7 years I still struggle with. If you want to see some more recent work check out my Gerkinman Returns trailer or my short loop "Wink".

Thanks for the feedback, its always nice to read comments from people who know what they are talking about.

[That's the point! 1]

Very fun! Obviously the art is alittle scruffy (why does the foreground have thin outlines and the background thick outlines?) but it has charm and the facial expressions and their animation gave the characters some infectious personality. It's not in english so i can't really judge the voice acting properly, but in terms of emotinal delivery etc. i thought it was nice! The sound quality is a little low, perhaps investing in a better mic or trying to use it better might be a good idea.
The script was nice but i felt a little lost at first. What exactly is the competition? You never really explained what the setting was and how the characters had ended up in the scenario. The jokes were funny and the animation really made me smile. There are a few issues with frame borders, there's the occasional bit of white space and i don't think you should draw a box around the frame (it doesn't add anything and is a little distracting).
Overall i thought it was good! The english subtitles seemed pretty accurate to me so good job on that and good luck with future episodes!

AtomK responds:

Thank you very much..! Actually, I think this episode is just a little introduction for the story... and yeah, I really need to improve my audio quality... my mic is a disaster... >=( .. Anyway, thank you for the review, I like you liked my flash =)

[Newgrounds Reviewers]

Have you seen Golfinho's work and do you know what irony is? If not the realization may come as an embarrassment when you look back on this flash. As for this flash, not very good. The art was very lazy, i mean half the time you didn't even draw to the edge of the border, the only time you used color was for the blue tears (inaccurate use of color) and there was no animation. It was really just a poorly made slideshow of some poorly drawn black and white cartoon scribbles. Don't submit stuff you make in half an hour unless in that half an hour entered some dionysian frenzy and poured your soul out through some creative technique you've spent years mastering to the point that time is almost an irrelevancy. You obviously haven't done that, so just take a bit more time and effort and be patient and produce something that you can be proud of.

GoKritz responds:

FINALLY.
someone who realises how crap this is.
I only made this for the gag, but people are telling me "oh, the animation is so good, it's fantastic, i love this style of drawing"
it's NOT GOOD
I MADE IT IN HALF AN HOUR
thank you.