PIED3's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[ALONE]

Perfect

This is the kinda of art i really love. It's in a style i love, and both it's concept and content are things i thoroughly enjoy too. It's exactly the kind of thing i look for on the internet, and i was extremely pleased when i saw this. You've created a realistic, believable living space which is rarely done in pictures like this. Normally the environment look ssuperficial and sterile, but in this thanks to i don't know what (the colors? the stuff lying around? the oil in the bed? the composition?) it feels very tangible. The sort of space i would expect to see if ever did go back to a robots apartment. I'm not much of an artist so i can't give much criticism on the technical side, but i really like the shadow of the window pane and the way it curves over his body crating a 3d feel. All in all it's a really nice piece and I thank you for making it.

deadspread83 responds:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I had to try really hard not to rush it so I could get all the little details in it, I'm glad somebody noticed :)

[Damn thing.]

Heh

I like this. The art style is cartoony and full of character, i could imagine it being a TV show. The composition of the shot is nice and the execution of the starry background is perfect. The actual content is good too, it's an interesting scene and it captures the imagination. The coloring is a bit simplistic but it does the job and all in all it's a nice piece. Good work!

Shotgunmadmax responds:

Very good review. Coloring is a big problem of mine. I think its simplistic a lot of the time on my pieces. Your review is very helpful. Thank you again.

[Lain Coubert]

Nice and sinister!

I really like this, and i think it's the first 10 i've given to a piece of art. The characters face is very intriguing and his expression is an interesting one. It makes it seem as though he feels some sense of duty in destroying the book. The concept is great as well, having the character facing the mirror looking at himself. The coloring and line work is all great and i just really enjoy the final product. Good stuff!

Emanhattan responds:

whoa. tyvm for your kind review!

[near death.pg one]

Nice but

there is a typo/english mistake. He says "This was all i ever wanted" but then says "Was to light a fag". He should say "To light a fag" OR combine the two sentences to make "This was all i ever wanted, to light a fag and end the pain." which i think sounds best. Him saying "was" twice is clumsy and doesn't make sense. I like the art though, nice red city contrasting with the dark colors and the light snow. I like the panel placement as-well, everything flows nicely when you read it. Good luck with pg 2!

afiboy69 responds:

no actually u should read it again... it says "This is all I ever wanted. Was to light a fag, and end the pain!" However i do know exactly what u mean, and thank u. i am looking forward to ur feed back =)

[Robot Day RE: I'm a Moron.]

Lol

Robot day fail :P Still its a cool picture and somehow the fact its on the wrong day makes it all the more funny. It has that "sad-robot-celebrating-robot-day-all-alone cause-he-got-the-wrong-date" kinda feel to it, good stuff!

RatsInTheWall responds:

Yeah, the horror of the fail has it's own charm and if bullshit film theory has taught me anything it's taught me that if you squint anything can look intentional. For a split second when I caught my mistake I was tempted to talk about the "isolation of being a month off" and go on about the bleakness of the desolate calendar-scape. But then I realized that was retarded and renamed the piece to call myself a Moron. Classy. Glad you dig my shame. :)

[war]

Cool

I like the idea, its simple but you've done it fairly well. I think you should have the shapes blend a bit more, or not at all. You have some bullet shaped splodges on the side of the blood, but no blood shaped ones on the side of the bullets, i like the colors and all in all its a cool picture.

graphgod responds:

thanks, and I actually got some small drops of blood besides some of the bullets, but I see now that they are barely visible