Relaxing and sombre. Not tritely sentimental but suitably melancholy. I enjoyed it! The opening synth that sounds a bit like a wind instrument is nice and the slow tune it plays sets the tone well for the rest of the song. I like the percussion and the use of the static/white noise sounds. A sort of plodding rhythm that marched dutifully on. I thought the mixing was decent and liked the panning. It's a bit short, but as you say, also a work in progress. Good luck finishing it, i'm sure it'll be great!